Reviews for United Equals Unstoppable
Noctus Fury chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
I really love this. I love how protective they're both are with each other. And I really loved how you showed how they came up with the plan. I agree, there must've been a time lapse - as movies just LOVE to do.

I've read your Zootopia stories about a year or two ago but I didn't have an account. So now I do, and I wanted to re-read your stories and give you an awesome review because your stories are so amazing! And I love how you have them mostly platonic. WAY too many people write about them romantically. When they've been great friends first. And I honestly love deep intimate friendships more than romance (and this is speaking as a romantic myself).

Thank you for taking the time out of your life to writing this and sharing this with us.

- Noctus
Laverock chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
Kudos. Excellent story.
DiegoRedeemedLover chapter 1 . 7/2/2016
This was such a wonderful missing scene! And I think you're right about the time lapse - Judy and Nick wouldn't have been able to pull together the diversion rabbit and make up their plan unless they had a few minutes longer than we thought.

Also I was hoping someone would write this and I'm glad you did. It's a very good execution of how everything might've went down.
Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps chapter 1 . 4/9/2016
I was hoping someone would write a story about what happened and how Nick and Judy came together with the idea to use blueberries. I'm glad you wrote it, and you did it so well. The characters match up well to their movie counterparts, which made this story all the better! Kudos to a great work!
CampionSayn chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Sa!

This seems entirely plausible for the canon with the emotional depth to match the highstrung situation between the leads and their thoughts. Given the limited time they did have, you make a fair point that it would have required time cuts and this is a nice fill it to use for thought.
KingdomXtar chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
It was really well-written, if a little minor change on a few dialogue and scenes(not to mention timing). But otherwise, they're all in-character, almost as if it's canonically(and exactly) what they do off-screen.
greenleaf62 chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
I absolutely LOVED this! I've been so curious about how they came up with their plan and their thoughts about it and you just wrote it out perfectly. Thank you for writing this!
XIIIth Hazard chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
I like it... though I was kind of hoping the 'savage scene' would have been in here too, it would have been interesting to read their thoughts.
Great Fic. love it to pieces... ;)
Jakaynne chapter 1 . 4/7/2016
I really really like this One-Shot! I also was wondering how they managed to come up with the plan so fast, by the way the movie made it seemed. This was thorough and I basically consider it canon. Thanks for writing this!