I liked the chapter!

I want to know what happens next so pls update this..

please update this novel if you don't mind...arghhhb the cliff is soooo arghhhhhhhhhh

I really like the approach you took to their backstories, I hope to see you update if possible because I'd love to see how tatsumi will act around this new esdeath

Update soon

Please update soon

Bring, though your chapters move quickly along I am deeply intrigued to see how it plays out.

hey author i really like this fic very much and i really hope that it isn't dropped looking forward to more updatesSeeing this relationship between tatsumi and esdeath is too wholesome

Hi, love this fanfic A LOT, love the relation you made between Esdese and Tatsumi and the strengh of tatsumi, make him badass. Do you know aproximatly when the next chapter will be release?

When are you going to update

Great story! Thanks for the update and hopefully for the future ones :)

Awesome chapter.

noice its been so long. i can't wait to see the reunion. honestly knowing her i can imagine her testing him in a fight for if it's the same tatsumi she knew then once she is satisfied stops fighting and draws him in for an embrace to symbolize that she still loves him.

Such a lengthy chapter! Love it. I don't think I need to point out your grammar leaves a lot to be desired, but it's still legible and makes sense. So a beta can make your story shine even more like it deserves. I give thanks for the update. Спасибо (I'm slowly learning Russian) It means Thank you!

It's great to see you update for a second I thought the story was dead but keep updating