Love the story and can't wait for more.

Grace a dead bitch.

Oh no. Citrus smell? Damn it tommy!
But seriously I'm so excited about this story. I only got into peaky blinders three days ago and binged through all the seasons. Then when I was looking for fics to get me through the emptiness of finishing the show, I came across yours. At first I was a little daunted by the size of your fic. But when I read it, I regretted not starting it sooner. My heart breaks for Charlotte with each chapter. I hope you know what an amazing writer you are.
Lots of love!

Please please please continue this story. It’s phenomenal!

I really like this story. Tommy and Lottie's relationship is complex and suggests a lot of history and love. but there are a few things that need addressing. your writing style needs a little work. also if you're introducing a new character into canon but the plot doesn't really change then what was the point?
I do like this story and I would read more but just thought I should let you know what I think.
good luck and I hope youre doing well

I hope Alfie is the other man mentioned in her fortune. Pls continue. This cant be left unfinished. Thx

Please continue. I. Love your story

Fantastic story. Really interesting premise, brilliantly descriptive and great character development. Your OC is great, I love her interactions with all the Shelby family. Plus her job, her abilities and how he often helps/ provides business and family ideas for Tommy. It's lovely that her and Tommy are reconciled and get to share sweet and romantic moments. It's a nice change that Tommy is only interested in the OC and not Grace as well I hope that continues. Please say the perfume isn't from him being intimate with someone. It would be saddening given he loves her. Look forward to the next update.

Hi I really enjoyed reading this and hope you will continue the fic. Your OC is interesting and feisty, and I hope that she gets a happy ending.

Loved it. Can’t wait for the next chapter

I love this!

Update please this fic is so flipping good!

Ah fuck I hope he did not fuck Grace.

'Citrus perfume' I hope he hasn't cheated on her with grace, and if he has, I hope she doesn't forgive him so soon!

It's going down people! Two timing jackass is going down.