| Reviews for For a Roll of The Dice |
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   laurajustin chapter 15 . 5/14 Great story! Can't wait for the next update! |
| FaeGhostReader chapter 4 . 12/6/2019 33 question marks? |
| FaeGhostReader chapter 15 . 11/30/2019 Please update |
| dragonfire1222 chapter 1 . 9/2/2019 I have an interval! Now to next commission (Or) Brought to you by the ;Spring of Youth; I Got Lost on the Path of Life; etc. Just choose a new thing every interval or even (my personal fav) Brought to you by virtual cookies |
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/29/2019 - Tactics Am I misremembering things, if I recall that Naruto does know how to use a bow? Regular explosive tags tied to arrows, combined with poison gas tags might've been a better way to thin out the fort. The AoE would've had a chance to hit a priority target (Like Shika, Hinata or Sasuke), wihixh the Chakra shots couldn't do and without the risks of the chakra blast. Also isn't she allowed to spam more clones to make up for her losses? Seems dilly not to do so. Next up, sending chains into the ground to swarm their "fox hole" during the bombardment at the end could've been handy as well. With luck, they could've enwrapped Hiruzen and go for the quick "kill" with him. The Sage's daddy's boys are going to be an issue. Shutting them down early is only prudent to prevent further escalation, like them trying to kill her for real. Lastly, she could've claimed that Horuzen's bijuuda killed off the prisoners she'd taken. The current phrasing makes it seem he merely hit some that weren't in the fort, but could've still contributed. It's far more horrifying to know you killed off your own imprisoned people. Might cause more friction between Hiruzen and Mito as well. A divided enemy is a good thing. |
| Elim Garak chapter 1 . 1/26/2019 You have problems with grammar even in your story description/blurb. Take a look at tenses - half of the description is in past tense, the other in present. The same is happening in the story itself - you switch from past tense to present and back again. |
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/26/2019 Yo,how about a secret objective been met by Naru and she gets a unsc style militere base and all things inclueded in like a personel space that only she can acces for now. |
| jaselp00 chapter 6 . 12/24/2018 Love this chapter. Especially the early part. |
| Oblivious IJ chapter 1 . 11/11/2018 HERE! [ -/ _ \- ] Its ITACHI! NOW GIMME DEM CHOCOLATE CHIP! ~ OnIJ |
| wtf chapter 10 . 10/27/2018 hope you don't make naru a fag cause that would ruin the story |
| Misaka Phenex chapter 14 . 9/30/2018 fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight fight Fight |
| Misaka Phenex chapter 13 . 9/30/2018 duck butt u dead boi |
| Misaka Phenex chapter 11 . 9/30/2018 time skip power |
| Misaka Phenex chapter 10 . 9/30/2018 i just wanna know if one minute in irl and hour there will the aging slow down like 25year has pass and irl like few months or something will she age or not |
| Misaka Phenex chapter 7 . 9/30/2018 shisui(sorry spell) wont have a child |
