yo, where dem updates at?

He's dead Jim.

Dude pls update

Yet another great UC gundam story as dead as the dinosaurs.

I wish that this story was still going, I really enjoyed it. Please tell me you are gonna make a comeback with this one.

Loved this chapter hope more come out soon

Not bad. I find this better than Seed.

Nice chapter, so Johnny is coming, I wonder if he is going to have a grudge match wit h Frontal, I know Frontal isn't Char but it would be nice seeing the Red Comet face off against the Crimson Lightning, kind of sad though when you realise that while Johnny disliked CHar, Char only had respect for Johnny Ridden

Ah, it is so wonderful to finally see this story finally updated! And it was awesome!

Thanks for the update.

Keep it up :)

interesting

It is really uncessary to copy the same episode script of the desert sequence. I mean why the hell bother with that? I had seen that and memorize it too well. It is just a big padding you just to add to fill more words.

And you say you have trouble writing? Then I am sad to say that you are showing obvious signs that you really are in deep trouble for copying the script.

Keep it up :)

I think you're doing a wonderful job of balancing your two main characters, you are giving time to Links to develop as a human being and understand more about the rules of the reality he's in. And Xavier, you're giving him a more human understanding through his own odd interactions with Marida. So I say good job so far mate.