There should have been at least a proposal if not an actual wedding.

Right I know you'll say its only fanfiction because that's what other writers have said when I make a comment they don't like but come on why is Jane anywhere near Boston Police Department or crime scenes? She should be on maternity leave at this very late stage of her pregnancy. Even though its only fanfiction I think its important to be accurate about procedures like maternity leave. I was going to give up as soon as that witch Silver returned. She makes me think of her as a combination of The wicked witch of the west, Cruella Deville and that character that Glenn close played in Fatal attraction. I have expected her to come between Jane and Maura. I was going to stop reading but I really want to see what happens to Jane & Maura and their babies. I really don't care at all for your style of writing. Way too much angst.

On a semi serious note I've read lots of fics where either Jane or Maura have twins. Thats not unusual in itself but since they're over 40 in most of these fics and getting IVF treatments and with IVF extreme multiple births are not all that unusual I couldnt help thinking that how much fun would it be for whever is pregnant to have triplets, quads or even octoplets like Octomom in California. Can you imagine how Angela would react to news that she's getting instant multiple grandchildren. Now the serious part I like how they are not instantly forgiving Angela for what she did. I see many fics when she's forgiven too quickly. I even remember the great episode 'Killer in high heels' where imo Jane forgave her mom too easily and quickly imo for showing Cavanaugh that video. I think it would have been better to let her suffer more.

I really hope Jane gets rid of that horrible Silver asap but knowing how you write I'm expecting her to be around for quite a few more chapters which is making this fic hard to read. I dont know what it is exactly I just dont like the character. I think at some point she's going to cause trouble for Maura and Jane.

I hate this fic already. I've read a lot of your fics and I just don't get why you have to put all these characters in stories. It seems to me your writing these stories but want to do anything and everything possible to stop the girls from developing their relationship from friends to something more. You want Jane and Maura to have a baby but you also want Jane to rip off her underwear and jump straight into bed with this Silver person who by the way gives me the creeps. I don't know why but as soon as I saw the name I instantly thought of Cruella De Ville. Hope Jane doesn't have a Dalmation.

Beautiful story! Once more another well written book. Thank you for the quality rizzles

Thank you. This was awesome.

Great job with that break. When I read the invitation to dinner I was pissed with Angela. Meeting the parents is a big deal and Jane was definitely not there.
Thanks for sharing

I have to be honest and say that I really hate this Silver character and am skipping over all the chapers with her in them. I hope Jane sees the light soon and gets rid of her.

The women could have one each.

I congratulate you, Miss Peg! It's a great story with a very good plot and very well told. I liked reading it from beginning to end. Thank you!
I hope that soon you can find an excellent permanent job and thus buy your house and be able to raise your kittens and help your family.
I wish you many successes on your way. And again, thank you, for all your effort you make to write and share your excellent stories with all your readers!

Great story!

Thanks for a great story.

Thankyou for answering my earlier question about SILVER.

Not everybody wants the girls to be together, as many fanfic stories clearly show.
This is YOUR STORY, so if you want JANE and SILVER together; then so be it.
It would have been more interesting too find out if SILVER could survive the
revelation that MAURA and JANE are trying for a baby.