Good read

Dam nick changed bad letting emotions take over. We should let them guide us not control us.

Holy crap you have a gift dude this is amazing.

Oman this is really good

Well he said he didn't abandon the story but 2 1/2 years without hearing a word from him begs to differ. Sadly means we probably won't get a conclusion of a story that i just binge read in one sitting, was a decent book just shame to see it end on the note of not being updated any time soon.

I'm so in love with this story! From the start the writing style pulled me in and from there the unique story. Each character well written. Jordy's character agonizing yet enjoyable to read and gripping. Nick and Judy's trying love to the bitter fallout. Most memorable were Bonnie's take on what love is, through the best and worst. Each chapter having me HAVE TO read the next. Even if I get to chapter 43 with a cliffhanger I'll still come back. I'm also intrigued by how you drew inspo from other authors here. Awesome job on this!

this made me tear up

Brilliant chapter. Jumping back and forth between the two storylines kept things interesting (not that it would have been boring otherwise).
For the past few chapters I’ve had a thought that maybe Wolford was the leak in the ZPD, but this chapter kinda killed that theory. I’m sorry I ever doubted you, Wolfy.
“Sweet malted meerkats” got a chuckle out of me, though Officer M. I. Gration got a bit of a groan.
I’m hoping against hope that more chapters will be released, as our friend Wolford is in a bit of a pickle at present, but I understand if finishing the story is out of the question. Life has its own plans for us and I won’t fault you for not having time. Just know that I have enjoyed this story and I wish you luck in your endeavors.

Desmond, what have you done?! I knew YouTubers were untrustworthy.

Great cliffhanger, hopefully I’ll find out more in the next chapter.

This is my first time writing a review, so please forgive me if it’s lacking. This is my second time reading through this fic (which is probably in my top five favorites), and this is the first time I’ve read this particular chapter. Lots of action near the end, which was fun. It’s almost midnight here, but I enjoyed this chapter so much I couldn’t put it down until I finished.
I noticed a Lion King reference, an Incredibles reference, and a Wile E Coyote reference. I particularly enjoyed the phone exchange between Judy and Wolford in the beginning of the chapter (“‘...I’m both surprised and delighted.’”)
I’m not sure when this fic was last updated, but since Zootopia was released over three years ago, I fear this story may have been abandoned and my review may go unseen. I hope that’s not the case. I’ll definitely try to make a habit of reviewing each remaining chapter just in case you do happen to see them.

Gasp! Nemo...

It’s a shame such a great story was abandoned. Especially after the author came out of nowhere with one chapter then went completely dark again. This story has so much potential, too... Had, I guess.

Thanks for writing this story. I read through all the chapters in 3-4 days and the last couple chapters have been very very good! I hope you finish the story and if not thanks again for writing this. Wish you a good life man!

PS: If you continue the story my bet is Desmond is the gang boss.

Well, considering that no progress has been made since 2017, Sept 5, I'll wager a guess that there will be No Conclusion to this story. Oh well. Life goes on.

Personally, I agree with Dr Who on the topic of Love. It isn't an emotion. It's a PROMISE. So far, story is going Very Well. Well, Onward!