Reviews for Not My Time |
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EMIYA14 chapter 14 . 7/20 If only gohan had a way to regenerate. Cuz using the kaioken alongside the super Saiyan forms is extremely harmful for the body but if they could regenerate then not only can they continue to kaioken event higher but also receive a shit tone of zenkais from it |
Guest chapter 24 . 1/27 Aw man I just finished if you could please continue that would be awesome |
Waka Metalbelly chapter 2 . 9/11/2019 You got the melodrama right on spot for a DBZ episode. All you left out were the hour long speeches/posing of "But you have yet to see my *true* power." crap they do. Love to see a crack fic actually *be* a crack fic. Also, "Speed's Superman could only dream of achieving"? I'm guessing this an alternate earth were Superman is what he was in the 50's TV show? Interesting concept. Nice to see someone going for the classics even if it's a crack fic. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 i feel like power levels should be spoil the storytelling. Everytime there is a fight pople go and see the power level. |
Beast Mode92 chapter 12 . 8/26/2019 Wonder Woman was a complete b**** in this chapter. She hopes chase him off over 5 years despite the fact that he hadn't hurt any innocent people in all that time. I'm not even sure they ever even explain why they wanted to capture him . Then when she needs his help she's an ass she demands that he helps him just turned around but you supposed to follow her like a good little boy. And finally after only giving him a half-assed explanation of what's going on she just called him a monster when he didn't really fouled out in her request. When she didn't even try to compromise. |
Beast Mode92 chapter 5 . 8/26/2019 This story is good. My main question is what made gohan suddenly become ok will killing so causally. Is it because he is now a full saiyan and the increased instincts caused this shift in mindset. Or is it the trauma of what he went through? |
kirosyamcha chapter 19 . 7/10/2019 still lost in the sauce and no clue whats going on |
kirosyamcha chapter 18 . 7/10/2019 this is all so random im lost in the sauce and mostly just guessing what is actually happening since its not being written o.O |
kirosyamcha chapter 11 . 7/10/2019 isnt it like a years travel by pod, from earth to planet vegeta, not an hour or so lol |
kirosyamcha chapter 6 . 7/9/2019 did i miss the inclusion of android 16 somewhere? i dont remember that happening and just seemed random |
kirosyamcha chapter 4 . 7/9/2019 if superman was 600m wonder woman would probably be between 450-550 |
kirosyamcha chapter 1 . 7/9/2019 ehh i think that situation is reaching, any of the stronger z fighters could have stopped cell after he became his base form, from becoming perfect again. but altogether interesting so far. |
Slime lord chapter 24 . 6/22/2019 Keep up the good work |
RickTheDane chapter 5 . 5/23/2019 Oh boy predicted the oozaru wrath form eh? |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/15/2019 Your chapters need a higher word count. |