Very nice ending to a fun story. Good luck with college! And with writing. If you're taking requests, I really hope you put some more Jon and Legolas scenes in the third story. I really enjoyed their interactions.

I'm crying on the inside, but not on the outside cause my brother is about 5 feet away and wouldn't understand the PAIN! WWWWWWHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

Thank you for the chapter! I love you!
This is out of control XD
Is so exciting, really i like it.
I want to see thorin reacting to the memories of Cheyanne and help her ;)

More soon please!

Isn't Cheyanne a too modern name for Middle Earth?

I have been enjoying your original and your sequel immensely. I love the dynamics built into Cheyanne and Thorin's relationship, that niggling hint that there might be a bit of attraction between her and Fili, the relationship developing between Cheyanne and Dis... All of it. Too bad that she sent Bilbo away. In time, I hope, he'll forgive her. There's so much more - like Kili and Tauriel, and Cheyanne turning the mountain on its ear ( in a good way) in future... And I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with Jon...

Please keep it up!

I am enjoying this story. I am glad the dwarves accepted Cheyenne. It was great to finally meet Dis and know she's on their side (why wouldn't she embrace the person who saved her brother and sons). Can't wait for the wedding!