Very cute I loved it :)

Can we have an update?

I read this on my phone the other day and was just blown away by it so I came back on my laptop so I could leave a review and I should have known you had written this! Ugh it is just perfect! You just absolutely nail their characters and their dynamic. I could read fanfic after fanfic of this. I just can't get enough of how phenomenal you are at telling their story. You have such a knack for realism. Your writing is honest, and is willing to confront some of the less appealing aspects of a person and a relationship, and at the same time, shows there is value in those ugly moments. I hope you feel inspired to write more!

love it!

Loved this! ! Please write more for this couple! :D

I love the parallel with Amanda's "I'm never having kids;" it was perfect. So was the ending with the little add-ons in parentheses. This is just too cute. I love it; I hope you write more Rollisi!

This was the sweetest thing :) The characterizations were spot on and I loved all the stuff from Amanda's point of view as her perspective on things changes. Very, very nice one shot!

So much good here - Carisi turning Jesse loud and dumb and Italian (because he would) and the shift from all the crap Amanda sees on the job, to allowing herself to acknowledge the reality of being with Carisi, the question about marriage, not defining things, but fumbling around the way they do. Nicely done.