OH! OH! OH! MY HEART! GODS! OH! WHY? You just murdered me with feels! Gods!

Oh my goodness! I could hardly breathe while reading this. You really got into Vader/Anakin's head here. This was so so great! Their history and their battle is one of the most EPIC things ever, and you certainly did it justice here with your words. Bravo!

Wow this was so good, are you going to make another fanfic cause I want to read it... Please pm me if you are

This was absolutely beautiful. You've left me with an indescribable feeling in my stomach. You are an incredible writer!

They're after Ezra!? :O No! No! Run Ezra! Run far and fast away! Don't let them catch you! Oh Ahsoka...I just want her to be alive! Is that to much to ask for!? :'(

Very good fanfiction! I love how you had Darth Vader constantly building walls around the pain of his past, so that he can't even say the names of anyone he loved and cared about. I also like your take on how you think the Ahsoka vs. Darth Vader fight ended.
I also really like the end scene between Vader and Sidious, and how their focus is shifting towards Ezra now, since he's starting to go all Dark Side at this point.
Keep writing!