ahhh i wish this wasn't a one shot i'd love to see you continue this! i'm interested in learning more about Asha & also really love your portrayal of Kylo Ren!

i don't usually like OC characters, but would love to see this story continue.

This is a really cool, interesting story. It's sad it's only a oneshot, this would make a great full story, I'm curious what's going to happen to her when she gets captured.

Oh, I like! Can't wait to get more of a backstory on Asha. I'm glad you didn't go into too much details; that tends to make a story lose it's luster!