I found your story and read it all in one sitting and then read it again! I really enjoy the pacing and I'm really curious how this thing with the Water dragon Slayer is going to turn out! Also all the Nalu moments areas cute! I really hope you update soon!( no pressure though) Great job!

Sorry for the late review; this was another great chapter! Glad Lucy made it through. The kiss at the end had me swooning. Great job!

They're just so innocent, lol. Forehead and cheek kisses affecting them like that. It's sweet.

I'm with Natsu. Erza channeling Mirajane can't possibly be good for him. :D

What a cliffhanger! Poor Lucy has been poisoned. This was a great chapter and I’m excited to see what happens next

Lucy better be okay.

Great chapter! It’s nice to see Lucy trying to figure out her feelings while the rest are trying to help. And sucks that the train broke down. Can’t wait to read what happens next

I hope Lucy will be okay.

Yay, I love seeing Lucy get a chance to kick some ass. God knows Mashima only likes to use her as fanservice/fodder 99.9% of the time no matter how much stronger we're told she's getting. So irritating.

Nice progression for Gajeel & Levy.

Great chapter.

Very interesting. I like where it's going so far.

Glad they talked.

Nice chapter. Good work. I hope that you are able to come back from hiatus soon!

Pleaseeeeeee update it

Come back soon! I love the story and how you portray the characters perfectly! Some of the best I've read in awhile

Hi, from Italy! :)
This story is so beautiful, so... perfect! Yes, i love it!
I like how you described the life of Natsu and Lucy, after Tartaros! Nalu power! ù.ù And Happy is so cute! 3
I would like to write you a good review, but my English is very bad! Sorry :(
I hope to read soon the new chapter!