| Reviews for Twist In Time |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2018 Good |
 61394 chapter 6 . 9/14/2017 good story |
| omaribacache316 chapter 5 . 5/24/2016 I loved it |
| omaribacache316 chapter 4 . 5/20/2016 I like it :) |
| omaribacache316 chapter 3 . 5/1/2016 i like it good chapter i hope more in the future |
| Madame Xanadu chapter 2 . 4/26/2016 Exellent chapter, Please continue. |
| Jamie chapter 2 . 4/26/2016 Good chapter. I like it so far. One thing that I would suggest as constructive criticism is you don't need to say "it's still in Beta" twice. Either have the doctor say it or just say it your narration. Or phrase it differently. Maybe explain what Beta is as some readers might not understand. Just a suggestion. Other than that, good job and I look forward to reading more! |
| TouchedbyaMunster chapter 1 . 4/24/2016 I like it so far! I loved Mask of the Phantasm and I always wish they had explored Andrea more! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
