So sad and so poignant and so true! Poor Jane, she really is in a terrible situation by this point in season one, and Rich got a lot of things right, despite his being on the wrong side of the law. Love this.

lovely story, taking time out from all the action to reflect on Jane's character and her place with Weller

Incredible story! I really enjoyed it!

This. Was. Awesome. Especially those last lines!

Great story! So good to see what's going on on our girl's head. Wish the writers would do her more justice at this point. And this "My heart beats inside his chest. I can't lose him". Ugh, just wonderful! I really love your writing. My favorite story is "The parachute";) I can't wait for more!

Oh. Oh my. This was lovely. You really captured these characters, and in such a funny, thoughtful, and moving way. That line about Jane's heart aligning with the man who has been looking for her for his whole life? Oof, killer.

Thanks for writing and sharing with us! I'm off to read your other stuff.

Loved it! Great job!

This. Is. Awesome.
Such a perfect fit with the episode. And I love how you don't really make any non cannon action yet. I mean, I'm all for Jeller (except when I root for Joscar), but they aren't ready yet. Theres WAY to much else going on.
But this is just a perfect fit, as she thinks about her past, Oscar, Rich Dotcom, everything. I am just in love this with story.

AHHHHHHHH YES THIS IS THE ANGST I WAS TO ROLL AROUND IN AND SIP WITH A SPOON! This is the perfection of the Jeller feels we've been talking about! And I adore the idea that Rich's on off sincerity is what rings truth for Jane!

God you are still the awesomest of author sauces m'dear!