shame u wont continue the story..

it's very good

I'm not going to read a saint Harry fic I

Harry is a fool that lacks any understanding of the politics of the world he finds himself in , if not for his magic I'll expect him to die an ignomible death in a few years. He has managed to alienate the stormlords who defied their king to put Robert on throne which is dangerous for a young dynasty. The stormlords will never follow Harry which will have repercussions in the future

Why does the size of the ship matter?

Please don't kill Robert and Ned...

I don't know what to say beyond the fact it was both highly entertaining and original.

You've got a real talent. Besided too few ASOIF fanfictions are set in Dorne.

Keep up the good work.

one year since i found this story, and this is my third reading of it...tow words for you kind sir : bloody brialliant

you write one heck of a good story..

You're dead.

Great start, I hope you come back to it!

Harry is very Jesus like in this story, it reminds me of Aslan.

this was a great read please please update as soon as you can please

For chapter 12:

I truly dislike this chapter. I feel it came out of left field in the opening and at the end Harry is an arrogant sob. He demands that he must be right and the world must change for him. That he must save everyone no matter the cost. That his morals are above everyone else's. It truly pisses me off.

"What is right verse what is easy?" That is probably Harry's thought process here. His OWN POV is that trying to save Shereen is what is right no matter the consequences; even if it condemns the world. The WORLD POV (and the goddess) is that one life is not worth the consequences. Which it isn't objectively.

I hope he can't save her. I really do. Or it curses him to take his first born and Arianne finds out or other innocent lives in exchange for hers. Something that tears at his soul and conscious. The realm of the divine is not for a mortal.

Honestly, you're story is great, and Harry's reluctance to lay with Arianne is reasonable, but I don't think you do her side justice. No 13 year old is so understanding. Especially a princess. They would fight more and she may even look for confirmation of her beauty from someone else, even if she loves Harry.

Honestly, that's the biggest frustration I have with this story. Harry is an extremely old man in a young body and only acts his age. Has a full time job and doesn't do anything for fun. Seriously, he wouldn't be able to get along with people his age as well as he does.