Really good read.

I loved this story your writing is amazing

somehow chapter 12 is missing

I enjoyed reading this. I prefer to have the backstory in the story rather than the author notes, but it worked. Thanks for the story. I'm off to read another on of yours.

This was alsome!

Really good

the end? what? there's so much left to be said. so many questions yet to be answered!

I think adding Phoenix tears might help the potion.

Is it Harold Severitus Naga or is it Harold Tobias Naga? I like the Severitus as Tobias was SS abusive, muggle father. So, I don't think Voldy would use it!

Where did Herc get a deer, when they are in London or did he get one while at the Burrow and is still digesting it?

So Sirius is just another liar, used to control what HP know or is he really on HP side?

Loved the story. The ending was interesting in the way you chose to wrap it up, but I liked that it felt like a true end.

I will say I absolutely love your “author’s notes” on this chapter.

Quite enjoying the story still... and the diversity. I would also like to point out... as far as the “gay characters”. There’s an entire school that these characters attend. No matter if they’re gay or not, I’m sure there were several straight students in the mix that were attending classes with them to even out the odds... carry on!

Well that definitely was an interesting way to introduce Draco! My curiosity has definitely gotten the better of me at this point!

Oh I absolutely adore Remus and Harry in this chapter! I’m so relieved to hear his role, or lack there of!