You are a lyrical genius.

So far, Queen may have more personality than the other all stars.

I loved it looking forward to the next chapter

I liked it looking forward to the next chapter

Not sure what happened but this chapter may have been corrupted a little bit as i see a lot of lines like stylemargin 0pt font-family etc. :P

It’s filled with coding

Err.. I can’t read the chapter ‘Tero’... It’s a bunch of codes

Awww~ welcome back :). This is a sort of laid back chapter but hey, it is nice. Quite nice that Neo is training again and I love how Tero is such a strict teacher. Yes, it's quite hard to focus on your training when nature itself is trying to convince you to come and play with them.
Law being such a good daddy to baby Cora really makes up my day. It was just so adorable :).
Thanks for the update :D.

I think the part I am looking forward to is Neo's reaction to law being a geek in Germa 66 lore when "Soba Man" arrives.

I love it looking forward to the next chapter

Hey long time no see, sorry i haven't reviewed this story in ages (still love it by the way), you still continuing with this fic? I'm looking forward to the continuation of the Wano kingdom Arc and the new threats these characters are going to have to face especially with Kaizo.

Good to see that Neo is coping well. She is so protective over their son - the very basic of mother's instinct. It was quite cute how Neo introduced Cora to their crew. It was quite fun how they also teased Law about Corazon.
Thanks for the updates :D.

LOL! I think this is the most mischievous Neo I had ever read :). I think everyone enjoys giving a scare to someone. It is fun seeing their faces as long as it was not you who ended up as a victim. Well, serves Kana right.
I think you did well in this chapter. Stress and overwork are some of the causes of early birth.
I love it how Neo suddenly felt love and joy after seeing their son. She was scared at first, most first time moms do, but their love for their child negates all that. Oh, Cora is mini version of Law :). So cute! 3

I think Neo is nesting. I think I had read it that a pregnant woman had an urge to clean up anything when her due is near.
Kaido's form is really intimidating. Somehow, Kaido's dragon form kind of reminds me of Dragonball's Shenlong. Even I is so worried about the alliance. I am all crossing all my fingers, especially my toefingers, for the safety of the Law and the Hearts. Strawhats will survive for sure, after all, they are the main characters. Oh, the dilemma of loving a secondary character :'(.

It's quite tough to write a fanfiction story especially when your favorite character was not primarily focused in the manga. I think you did nice in this chapter. It's quite nice how you focus on the other Strawhats. Also, it looks like we will be seeing Cora soon.