I ADORE this. I love how Alistair is already clearly smitten with her. I think you nailed his awkwardness perfectly, as well as his want and willingness to protect her and make sure she's safe.

Alistair's little show of confidence at the end was so cute. I just love an awkward Alistair, but when we get to see those small glimpses of some of his confidence, it's just sexy as hell. I can't wait for Alistair (and me) to learn more about her backstory and who she really is!

Amazing job! I can't wait for more!

Oh my god. This is a fun twist! I do look forward to seeing how this plays out.

Hi! Thank you so much for your comment :)
Yes there is more coming, I have other writing projects I am working on as well ( most are posted on Ao3 ) and my muse has been a little quiet this month. However, there will totally be more to come! :)

I love this! You have a very original take on the Dragon Age story and I hope to see more.