I have read this several times and I admire it more each time. Bringing Mace and Dooku into the inner circle is genius. Thank you!

*reads the names and works in a pharmacy* you stop that right this instant, I'm getting vietnam flashbacks

Amazing work, I am thoroughly addicted and very glad there’s more to read! I feel so sad for Obi-Wan losing half his vision though, but also loving the developing relationship between Ben and Mace as well. You write these characters so well!

Anakin and Dooku? I'm not sure what I think of that. You keep out doing yourself, and I like how he went to Mauls brother, too.
I can't see any mistakes!

Just reread Reprise I and II, and I still love your story! I love how Obi-Wan grows to be his own person completely separate from Ben. Ben keeps making small changes, and sometimes he never realizes it! Thank you for writing this wonderful story, and I hope you keep going.

This is quite possibly my favourite chapter in the whole series; my family can attest to my suppressed squeals as I read the duel between the Terrible Twosome Himself. It overshadows basically every duel I’ve read- or watched- before and after... And is almost a Duel of the Fates in itself.

I just realised; could Palpatine not have known it wasn’t Obi-Wan from the missing braid? I’d imagine it would be pretty visible, or rather the lack of it would.

Fun chapter. The lineage of Dooku all gathered is a powerful image. Can only imagine the pride in him as well as Jinn. Was curious if Damask would make an entrance. No one was ever aware of him. He is gone really early though. Had he even been injured by this point? Took a lot of luck for Sideoua to make that move.

One word describes Future Wan, and that is derpy... I mean, allowing Anakin to be trained only in the light when the prophecy said BALANCE is like saying "you are right-handed, so you must go everywhere hopping on your right foot". The Father tried to get him (Anakin) to accept balance on Mortis, and the Jedi had already brainwashed him. How much worse will it be with them getting him earlier?

Great story. thanks for the hard work. can't wait to read the next one.

Another fantastic story! I love how much depth and thought goes into each of the characters and their reactions and counter-actions. Dooku staying with the light, Palpatine being shocked, Mace trying to figure out how to hold it down, etc. But I especially love the interaction between Ben/Qui Gon/Obi-wan! Ben helping Obi-wan in this last part was pure brilliance.
Thank you for the epic adventure!
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I liked how the detail of the lice forcing Ben to shave his beard proved crucial here: it's nice to see the thought and consistency that goes into the plot.

A good continuation.

i know this is late in the game but i often - when im reading this story - in my mind i'm reading Quin-Gon in Lian Neeson voice whenever he speaks..

You should get paaaaaaiiid. Whatever, here's some fake cash for ya. [$] [$] [$] [$] (Those are dollar bills) Yeah, okay, I'm not gonna type out the millions of bills your story deserves but DUDE NICE JOB.