Please keep goin I love this

You have not failed this chapter at all...
The length could have been a bit longer, but the fanfic was amazing.(grammar and everything)
One more thing, Natsu's pleasure should have been conveyed more.

Overall it was an amazing fanfic. Keep up the good work.

Love this story! Omg! Omg! Great story hoping for an update! Wow!

When is Nastu going to confess to Lucy. They already done the deed.

Great lemon chapter. I like the way you think.

Love your story, update more often I'm curious how this ends

I really hope you plan on finishing this. It’s one of my favorites and it would be a shame for it to remain unfinished.

I love the story so far. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Keep up the awesome work.

Not to bad at all. I really enjoyed this chapter. Don't stop writting you have a great talent here.

I love this, so much!

I love your new chapter. I know you're busy but I hope you get to update soon. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more!

This was worth the wait. Poor Natsu is such an idiot. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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lucy seems depicted so realistically toward who she is in the anime (in my opinion with the way i personally perceive her.) and natsu is an oblivious bitch. perfect.

dope.

I'm about ready to cry... Where's the rest of the story,? *Makes grabby hands*

Amazing writing!