Continue pls

when are you remakeing this one
?

Noice story. Not many fem Gil stories out there. Would be interesting if she gets paired with Shirou. I am a sucker for enemies turned lovers. And is there something going on between Shirou and Bazett?

Please tell me when can you update, I got really hooked up onto this story and I'd like to know if you're going to continue it or just drop it

Love this story, hope to see it continue

Haha! I love it!

Is the fic dead? Please tell me it ain't, I like the story and is still waiting for further updates

Will there be a Harem?

I think you should focus on a few stories you truly like and leave the rest for later... Don't want to sound like an arse but it's pretty upsetting as reader to see you update a completely new story and leaving the others in the dust.

I like this a lot please continue

This is a really cool concept. I don't think that Ive seen anyone else do a Kirei and Shirou story this way before.

You're writing upon as apon. I have noticed this mistake 2 chapter in a row and thought you would like to know o/.
Otherwise the story is good.

Thanks for the chapters _.

The ability of Shirou's Pure Eyes seems like a really random mutation considering the circumstances in which he obtained them to be honest. Since cursed flames were involved, I was honestly expecting a Pure Eye variant of the Mystic Eyes of Flame or something to that effect. That would have made more sense than a Clairvoyant ability.

I'm not really all that sure about what direction you're taking Shirou's abilities. He's learning Bajiquan and Kirei's Super Bajiquan, he can use Black keys decently well, and he still seems pretty mediocre at Magecraft. That's to be expected though, given who his teacher is. And now he has Pure Eyes that grant him a form of Clairvoyance. As powerful as Kirei's martial art is, it really isn't all that useful against more powerful opponents. The height of Kirei's power was during his fight against Kiritsugu, in which both were capable of fighting at a low tier Servant level. But that was only due to the fact that Kiritsugu had Avalon and was able to push Time Alter to a Square level as a result, and because Kirei had a shit ton of Command Spells.

Compared to that, Shirou doesn't really have all that much going for him aside from his Pure Eyes. And in the grand scheme of things, they aren't all that impressive either. So what draws Gilgamesh to a person who is relatively mediocre all things considered? Her friendship with Enkidu initially stemmed from the fact that Enkidu was able to fight him/her as an equal, and evolved from there. Gil turned down Iskander's offer of friendship, citing that Enkidu would remain Gil's only friend. And that was with Iskander having A rank Charisma, meaning he was pretty persuasive and personable.

So why the interest in Shirou? He's not powerful like Enkidu was, nor as Charismatic as Iskander. And I find I highly unlikely that he will ever be, though to be fair few are. Even the fact that he genuinely did not want anything from Gilgamesh's fault as a reward/recompense would probably only draw a modicum of interest from the King of Heroes. And while Ko-Gil is infinitely more chill than his/her adult form, I can't really see her offering friendship so freely. Especially given how significant the concept is to her character.

In regards to wanting to mold Shirou into a worthy king to rule beside her. That seems a bit out of character, considering the fact that Gilgamesh looks down on all others who hold the title. Because in Gil's mind, he/she is truly the one true king. I'm pretty sure that facet remains even as a child. At best, I could see her wanting to turn Shirou into a worthy consort or vizier (or both). But Kingship? That seems rather unlikely.

Ive been looking forward for this story to continue but you probably have a busy schedule or a flag on this fic but i say it looks very interesting none the less pls continue this. Fic as i have grown an interest in it.