Yeah for pride of Portree! :D I honestly really enjoyed this story NERC. You really brought Sybil Trewlaney's character to life and got into the fine detail of her mind and thoughts. I've noticed you are really great at doing character pieces, whether it's Snape or Sybil, you get into that character's mind completely and make their POV so convincing and immersive.

The story shows the struggles a Divination teacher has when not wanting to scare people balanced with not knowing all of their own prophecies.

great stuff

A brilliant story! I loved the way you explored Sybill and brought out a depth to her, I know I haven't seen before :) It was lovely and original and I'm considering Sybill in a new light now! One thing is that there seems to have been and error when you uploaded, your AN at the end has jumped up ahead of the last line :) Overall, this was a great story and I really enjoyed seeing Sybill develop through the ages!

Very well written.