Reviews for Dangerous Game |
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Natters chapter 3 . 1/19 Good fic. More please |
amanda.mars.42 chapter 2 . 1/8/2017 Oh my goodness please continue this is amazing! |
Luciferlover220 chapter 2 . 12/2/2016 Please update this soon. You were on the ball with this it almost matches the series. How did you know Chloe was a miracle? Devinely favored same diff. |
nrdhrd3 chapter 2 . 11/2/2016 please please please update soon! |
Luciferxoxo chapter 2 . 8/10/2016 What are you doing?! Where is the third chapter already, I've only just read this but goodness you have some readers who were here since the beginning, if not for mine then for their sake, POST CHAPTER 3! |
foreverunique chapter 2 . 8/4/2016 Loved it. Great work so far. hope to read more from you soon |
Luciferlove369 chapter 2 . 7/18/2016 You have a real good thing going here. Keep it up and come on! Update I'm a bit peturbed that you got the first 2 chapters up within days of each other and this next one is taking forever. It better be good.! |
ImpatienWaiting chapter 2 . 7/15/2016 What the hell! That was way better than I expected. Don't leave us hanging like this. UPDATE NOW PLEASE! |
Fanfav234 chapter 1 . 7/15/2016 Wooooooowwwwwww that's all I can say! You've captured the characters so well! I can't wait to see how this turns out, it's been a while since you've updated when can we expect the next chapter? |
Cool guy 23 chapter 2 . 7/15/2016 So have you read the comics? How do you know the show is loosely based on it? Your writing is good, if I had one piece of advice it would be to work on your pacing but that might just be a formatting issue with how it's being uploaded. You've got a good thing going here though keep it up. |
Sara chapter 2 . 7/14/2016 MORE MORE MORE PLEASE! I need my Lucifer fix! |
Tom chapter 2 . 7/14/2016 Are you hinting Chloe might be an angel? I don't know how that would work, I look forward to how you spin this. Also things escalated quickly there, which is how I think the next season will play out. Can you give some attention to Maze and amenadiel, I think their relationship is a good one as well. Good job some errors but nothing horrendous. Patiently waiting for the next chapter. |
Brianne chapter 2 . 7/14/2016 Love love love eek this story, my only remark is the transitioning l, I can see the line breaks but for my eye to just jump to the next line of a new scene jars it a bit but your writing is beautiful. You're really capturing the characters, you nailed Maze for sure. KEEP GOING PLEASE! |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2016 Very interesting story, I'm interested to see how this plays out. |
Fiona chapter 2 . 5/19/2016 What can I say, except that I love what you do ! I just... I really enjoy reading you :-) Can't wait to see what's next. (And sorry if I write bad, but I'm french...) |