| Reviews for Shooting Straight |
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   linkiepie2214 chapter 5 . 2/21 THIS IS A FUN INSANITY FULLED STORY THAT I AM LOVING EVERY WORD OF! |
| Framework chapter 3 . 2/8 Pretty sure Sexy jutsu qualifies as an A-rank Kinjutsu. |
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 6 . 9/2/2018 As an extension to my previous comment on ch7 (only one post per chapter...) i actually like the twists of this story. |
| SuperVegitoFAN chapter 7 . 9/2/2018 I like Naruhina but theres PLENTY of fics like that out there... including canon. One of the main big benefits of fanfics is the variety afterall. |
| Ann chapter 13 . 8/21/2018 You've made your OCs too strong (Jiraiya's kid taking him down and keeping him down with a arm hold? Samurai guy killing 30 guys in a single move?), which makes them uninteresting. |
| Soulfire47 chapter 19 . 8/13/2018 This is a very interesting story, I especially like how Naruto's Henge is handled, and though he swaps into a girl here and there for comedy purposes, it feels like it's really only done for that. Would be nice if that could be expanded, we've never seen Naruto go girl, fall asleep like that and wake up still transformed for example. Or really stay that way for an extended period of time without break. Are there even any fics that incorporate that concept too? Would be nice to have someone direct me to some. |
| Tomoe Mami chapter 19 . 8/12/2018 :D I am impressed. I never expected Kiba to beat Neji so quickly, or Shikamaru to lose. Great job. |
| erik chapter 18 . 1/2/2018 Great writing with an intriguing selection of new or crossover characters. |
| linkiepie2214 chapter 18 . 11/28/2017 Nice work and keep it up this is really fun to read. |
| Reclusive Dork chapter 9 . 11/27/2017 I'm going to be honest, I actually want this to become sasunaru now. |
| OtakuChika chapter 1 . 10/18/2017 tell me about it." and then the rest of that, freaking ff dot net urgh |
| OtakuChika chapter 1 . 10/18/2017 omg, this seems so good already! I have to say though, I'm really struggling to follow along with the story. Please use proper writing practices and start a new paragraph every time someone else begins talking. exTell me about it." -Kakashi sighed, "blah blah, not important to the point, blah blah." -Idk if allows new paragraphs in comments yet but each new paragraph is marked by a. PLEASE FIX THIS! It'll make it much easier to understand. |
| Tomoe Mami chapter 18 . 7/31/2017 I thought Leone was in this chapter? It's a well written chapter, regardless. |
| Tomoe Mami chapter 17 . 7/30/2017 Regarding Leone, which tailed Beast is hers? |
| Tererdrone chapter 18 . 5/13/2017 Glad the story is back |
