Continue and update please Dumbledore find way destroy grimm paradite in Cinder Fall .That make magic return into Ember and She Dumbledore build wards around city to stop All grimms from they create stable portal after voldemort defead and magic vorld change with pureblood idealogy is and nonmagic worlds is united and to help four kingdoms to vipe out grimmsand restore Fallen more.

Awesomeness please continue

Now you're ruined it all. Magic was the only advantage that Harry had in this world. It was the only thing that made him unique. You're bringing all sorts of witches and wizards from Earth to Ramenent.
Sure this'll add up to the difficulty that Harry'll face when he fights against the villains but in doing so you've snatched away the main thing that made Harry unique and interesting.
You've written a good story, I'll admit that, but you botched it all up with the decision to bring so many people from Harry's world over here.
That's it for me. I'm dropping this novel. Goodbye.

The whole fight with Cinder was a fucking joke. The Author just made it long because Cinder was the big boss and shouldn't go down easily when in reality Harry could have simply cast a stunner from behind her and she would have gone down like everyone else.
What author did here was understandable but no less disappointing.

please update immediately

I'm adding this as a favorite, though it would be better if it was complete. That being said, pacing is good. The story isn't getting bogged down. Everything seems to advance the plot. I've read 3 or 4 decent rwby crossovers, and tried to read as many others that failed much of the previous.

I don't really have any recommendations, other than finishing this. The story as is works. There are variations that would also work, but you don't need them. I'd think you could possibly finish this in half a dozen chapters, or possibly double the length of the story. Either could work.

Damn. One of, if not the only good HP/RWBY crossover is dead. I hope you will continue it at some point, since it was long time since I saw good Potter being put somewhere else.

It's a shame you never continued this story

And here is my main problem with these types of stories, the first two chapters exemplify them. You have random character X spill everything to Ozpin, Ozpin believes it all despite magic existing there and him himself having said magic along with personally knowing actual gods, and following that without any proof they are initiated in a highly dangerous and specialized combat test which can easily kill people that have trained.

Why do people do that? It never makes any type of sense and any leader, let alone an ancient one, wouldn't do such things.

The first two chapters always bugged me about this story. I feel like he wouldn't bring up alternate universe yet, and if he did I think he would call it something else. For example, he could say he fell through an Archway or Artifact that transported him here. Sounds less crazy. The more he describes his home, the more they realize it's something more than just a nearby kingdom. A quick demonstration be it memories or magic and bam your set.

I know that the author is still active. So please continue the story!
I love it.

Also, in some places the owner word of "your" is mixed up with "you are/You're". just something I noticed.

Dun dun dun! Will Ron survive? Tune in next time to find out!

Geez did you have to go and do a classic tv series episode cliff hanger?

Quite a good fic, I like it.
Though I think you are being a little bit thick in regards to keep Harry's magic a secret... I mean it's not like people knowing he is a wiz carries the specs of everything he can accomplish. All everyone is gonna get from that is that he has some fairytale powers, but no one will be able to know for certain what does that entail or how to counter it. If you think about it, not even Dumbledork can be prepared and have countermeasures ready for every possible action taken by another wiz. It would be just like knowing that every other hunter has an aura ability. Of course that is unless you go down a mega-tech path were you simply pull out some crazy tech that completely nullifies his whole magic.
Yay for more!

This has been an extremely interesting read. Every crossover with a similar beginning seems to focus on Harry being completely messed up over not being able to get back home. I really like that aspect of this fic, because it seems more realistic. Obviously it would be a *brutal* shock initially, but before long I think Harry would be okay with a fresh start. It's not like things are great for him in his original universe. Fifth year after the DoM was a low point for him, especially, but just in general he has a shitty time with things. His childhood was crap and while school is somewhat better he still faces death every year, and with only two friends to help him out. One of whom isn't entirely reliable.

I like what you've done with Harry's weapon, too. His wand-sword is a really cool idea. I definitely like it a lot.

I feel like there's not enough dialogue between Harry and Pyrrha, though. I want'em to talk more, or just to hear Harry's thoughts on Pyrrha more. But I really like romance so maybe that's just me.

I look forward to any future updates, and thanks for what you've already written. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

Interesting...