Oliver is a great guy...but we need another room on this house.

Oh no...Oliver is in danger...too many teenage gals in the same room. Run away! O,o I keed a bit.

Good redirect, Aurora. Ciril seems cool.

Gotta admit. I love to hate Faust. He's a good bad guy. Good job. Those aren't the easiest to write.

Ciril Whelp...Whelp...is that a last name? It sounds like an insult. He's gonna be powerful isn't he? Like white mage like?

*special post* Matchmaker Pose, transform!

Rey time traveler confirmed...by me...calling it again(?)

Poor Oliver. Even then he was protecting her.

Really Dip? You just called him a liability...ouch.

Sheesh. Lexie is kinda wild. D

Oh look. Convenience! I mean...it's been earned you know so that's cool.

Dipper needs to work in a bar because he just therapisted this whole chapter XD

I'd say Ciril is a bit forward, but being homeschooled, he's more independent and likely to make some informed choices.

God...not the box...Rey...jealous or...something else?

*snickers* Breathless panting...and I have a new swear word! Yay me!

Yo Lexie, pick up that phone cuz I called it...not like it was a secret.

At this point, I ship dipper with aurora xD

Daammmnnnnnn Pike is Wendy’a dad? My mid has exploded.

Hmm what this I see *peers* I must make great attention towards this

ooo boy a reread was definitely in order, I like what you have changed. This reflects the writing style you have now, the flow is so much better. (I figured I might as well start at the beginning since it's been a bit and reread it all especially since you did a rewrite). Looking forward to reading it all in one go.

God I love this story, keep up the good work!

Is Ciril gonna be someone for Aurora? Guess Faust is the next battle? Who is Rey and what’s his problem? Great chapter! Keep doing what you’re doing! Eager for the next chapter!

Go and keep writing!
This story Is one (maybe the) best GF One I've ever red!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!;-)

Man, i barely red the first chapter and I'm already in love with your fic. Please, don't stop creating and developing this story, I think it's awesome!

The whole possible threesome is driving me batty. I am going back and forth from rooting to holding on to hope that rora will find her very own special person

Chapter was great, definitely love where you’re taking things.

Damn. Faust is living up to his name. Sca-ry.

Oh yeah. The world is wrong.

Paz and Mabes...proof showing that making things pretend won't last forever. The truth comes out...like they did P

O,o Rey? Oh...time travel! Hah!

Yeah he's way to calm for this. Cheat codes huh? *snickers* Bwahahhaa! Oh I see what he did there! Go Oliver!

Gonna be honest. Love this cliche. I think it's important. - Huh...that was also physical too. GIFfany actually helped!

Oh Soos. You have the biggest heart ever.

Why do I have a feeling that Aurora's admission is gonna start something that's going to complicate but make amazing Dipper's life?

This chapter was GREAT! They beat Gifany, everybody's ok, and It looks like we're gonna end up with a 3 way! But we've still got Faust out there somewhere, not good. And the puzzle box, wonder what that's gonna do? Keep up the good work! Loving it!

And just like that we're in a poorly written light novel P

Oh dear God, it is a poorly written light novel!

Oooh Melody's gonna kick ass this time. I think she deserves to be the doogooder.

Let's be honest, since when is death a perm status?

0_0

Came to the end way to fast whaaaaaaaa T_T

Wait are Wendy, Rora and Dipper going to be a three some? That would be cool yet suck at the same time. Rora would beable to be with Dipper andngrow feeling for Wendy too but at the same time it would be awesome if she had her own love. Oh well I am curious to see how it plays out