Reviews for Reformation
im late chapter 1 . 7/15
I liked how you create two Kaguyas, If you are going to write another Kaguya x whoever fanfic, make Kaguya one of those types that is hard to soften but eventually does.
gabelou1991 chapter 7 . 2/6
C'est mignon.
gabelou1991 chapter 4 . 2/6
Elle ressemble trop à hi ats grâce à son comportement.
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 2/6
J'aime beaucoup la discussion entre mè fils.
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 2/6
2 kaguya ceux la me donne des idées.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/28/2019
are you alive ?
post more chapters !
anthonymosca27 chapter 7 . 5/17/2019
Very well written and very believable thank you hope to see more if not I wish you the best on whichever your future endeavor you choose to follow
Ben Walker1 chapter 7 . 1/7/2019
noooooooodidn't even realise I was at the 7th chapter until I couldn't get more story
lennymosca4 chapter 7 . 10/18/2018
Story has potential fourth of a lot of misprinted words I just thought I'd point out the story has potential and you could creativity with your story and you make it's believable the tenTails could have taken possession of her you stories very well written out and hopeful the read more
draculyn28 chapter 7 . 4/11/2018
Very good, hopefully soon, greetings.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/31/2018
So this is Hinata disguised as Kaguya then?
Cause seriously your bullshit characterization of a woman who's had at least one lover already and a millennia of watching humanity leaves me no other inference.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2018
Exposition no jutsu - check
Boring ass and cheesy dialogue - check
Faulty retcon of characters to make them more or less likeable - check
Spelling errors - check

All in all, a 4.7 on the Richter scale of bad fanfic.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/18/2018
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insanemaelstorm chapter 7 . 1/14/2018
Nice story. I like how you have portrayed Kaguya. I also like how much you are focusing on developing her. I like how she interacts with everyone. Looking forward to reading more
Aramus13 chapter 7 . 12/18/2017
Nice update!
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