Reviews for Reformation |
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im late chapter 1 . 7/15 I liked how you create two Kaguyas, If you are going to write another Kaguya x whoever fanfic, make Kaguya one of those types that is hard to soften but eventually does. |
gabelou1991 chapter 7 . 2/6 C'est mignon. |
gabelou1991 chapter 4 . 2/6 Elle ressemble trop à hi ats grâce à son comportement. |
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 2/6 J'aime beaucoup la discussion entre mè fils. |
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 2/6 2 kaguya ceux la me donne des idées. |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/28/2019 are you alive ? post more chapters ! |
anthonymosca27 chapter 7 . 5/17/2019 Very well written and very believable thank you hope to see more if not I wish you the best on whichever your future endeavor you choose to follow |
Ben Walker1 chapter 7 . 1/7/2019 noooooooodidn't even realise I was at the 7th chapter until I couldn't get more story |
lennymosca4 chapter 7 . 10/18/2018 Story has potential fourth of a lot of misprinted words I just thought I'd point out the story has potential and you could creativity with your story and you make it's believable the tenTails could have taken possession of her you stories very well written out and hopeful the read more |
draculyn28 chapter 7 . 4/11/2018 Very good, hopefully soon, greetings. |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/31/2018 So this is Hinata disguised as Kaguya then? Cause seriously your bullshit characterization of a woman who's had at least one lover already and a millennia of watching humanity leaves me no other inference. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/31/2018 Exposition no jutsu - check Boring ass and cheesy dialogue - check Faulty retcon of characters to make them more or less likeable - check Spelling errors - check All in all, a 4.7 on the Richter scale of bad fanfic. |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/18/2018 PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
insanemaelstorm chapter 7 . 1/14/2018 Nice story. I like how you have portrayed Kaguya. I also like how much you are focusing on developing her. I like how she interacts with everyone. Looking forward to reading more |
Aramus13 chapter 7 . 12/18/2017 Nice update! |