Reviews for The Whirlpool Magical Son: Book 1
Guest chapter 4 . 3/16
Pls update
Kenneth973 chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
Smh, I love him too but ya can’t take kids
Abhichatlevi chapter 4 . 11/16/2018
Plzzz continue!
starrat chapter 4 . 10/14/2018
I loved it so much
Dark Princess Ayane chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
Are you ever going to continue this author-san? If so... Please update soon! This so awesome... I am looking forward on how Sasuke's intero- questioning for the Dursleys. I think Harry/Takao would be in Slytherin if he does go to Hogwarts. Also.. it would be very entertaining to read how the Potters and also Dumbledore and Snape's interaction. I can't wait for it! This is one of my favorite HarryPotterXNaruto fanfic. You are doing a very awesome job with this story. Also a big thumbs up with your other story!
Monster King chapter 4 . 9/19/2017
Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update comes please continue it soon.
pupstarstar chapter 2 . 7/10/2017
I would just like to point out that both sets of Harry's family has a red head mother, a black haired father, and a black haired brother. I can't wait to see what will happen when they meet it will be hilarious. Will Snape will think Naru is more beautiful than Lilly, especially with her exotic whisker marks and when he finds out what she did with Harry, plus it would be a hit to Lilly's pride that her childhood friend that had a huge crush on her likes another red head better than her. But when points out this "crush" in front of a lot of people, it turn out to be a platonic love of a sister and brother, and make Snape a descendant of a Uchiha maybe have low reserves right when they meet so that it explains why he had-int activated his Sharringan.

(looks back at paragraph and *shrugs*) not sure were my point is but I think I got it off my chest...maybe*shrugs*
nightlyreader chapter 2 . 5/12/2017
I hope you update soon, I definitly want to know what happens next.
Hm this Naru would have definitly been in Slytherin in my opinion. She is definitly cunning and her ambition is the greatest you can have as a ninja.
The same with Sasuke.
Sakura is a bit more difficult but I would sort her in Huffelpuff or maybe Ravenclaw.
Takao is also a clear cut for Slytherin, again he has a great ambition at such a young age and his mum thaught him how to be cunning and he wants to work from the shadows.
I personally don't think he would fit anywhere else if I'm being honest.
Gryffindor is out because again he preffers to work fom the shadows and he doesn't like to ruch into things. Every ninja needs to be brave or they couldn't work in this field, so it's hard to categorise them on this characteristics. So taking this into acount I wouldn't say he would fit into the Gryffindor house with his other character traits.
He doesn't fit well into Huffelpuff because he doesn't trust easy, he might be fiercely loyal if you finally gain his loyalty but it seems to take a long time for him to get to this point (if you don' belong to his family). And he doesn't seem to be loyal to the village because it is his village, but because his important people live there and it's important to them. In my personal opinion he would have a harder time in Huffelpuff because of this. He is definitly a hard worker but that is again because he wants to be the best to become an ANBU captain.
Ravenclaw is a bit hard to say actually, because we haven't seen how he handels knowledge.
But I would say he wants knowledge not for knowledge sake but because he wants to be the best he can be. So it all comes down to his ambition again.
I would say Slytherin is also the best fir for his temperament, because the other kids there will be cautious at first too, so it doesn't matter that he takes a bit longer to make friends.
Halley Vanaria chapter 4 . 1/5/2017
Interesting... please update as soon as possible XD
Panda chapter 4 . 12/23/2016
I wonder how the talk between naru and Takao will be? Will there be more accidental magic (in class, in training, or at home)? Will Dumbledore see Sasuke when he see him at Harry's Aunt place? I so far am in love with your story. I can not wait for the next chapter. Happy Holidays and have a happy new year
fenixrojo36 chapter 4 . 12/12/2016
Sigue con la historia
The Jingo chapter 4 . 12/6/2016
A little rough but I'm enjoying this quite a bit.
jgood27 chapter 4 . 11/7/2016
Love this story and can't wait to read more
doraemax chapter 2 . 11/6/2016
Naruto: Gryffindor or Hufflepuff
Sakura: Ravenclaw or Gryffindor
Sasuke: Slytherin for sure. Though he can go to others except Hufflepuff.
6258489 chapter 4 . 11/6/2016
Sasuke won't let his pregnant wife have a simple conversation with her son? and somehow it is AMA to travel? I know that women do travel and exercise while pregnant in fact exercise is usually good for them, and here I thought chairs was supposed to improve them
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