The way you portrayed Sabo and Ace was so amazing! Their brotherly banter was on point that I can see it really happening on canon. It's hard to find a story focused on Ace and Sabo.

Thank you for this great story!

What an amazing mix of brotherly love and angst. I'd been wondering about Sabo's reactions to Ace's fire.

Love your Luffy

And the end with Shanks and Whitebeard, pretty great!

I love the emotional energy and Sabo's crazy

Oh. My. Goodness.

Koala is my favorite. I lived Garp, but hit damn she is amazing

Ugh. Just, the violent brotherly love. Amazing. My favorite

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IT GOT BETTER!

All of this! I love that Garp got added, and that they were fighting in front of him.

Just, everything. I laughed so hard, honest to goodness laughed out loud. I love this chapter. Its amazing

This is so funny and amazing and I love the dynamics between Sabo and Ace and its definitely happier than cannon and I love this so much!

This is probably my 10th time rereading this and this story is so freaking good every freaking time! I love how you write the interactions between Ace, Sabo, and the Whitebeards (and later Koala), and I love how you don't act like everything's okay with Sabo and Ace's mental state. I love how you write Sabo slowly getting better and how Ace knows him so well and is able to help him. I love the way that Koala fits into the story - as someone who knows Sabo as well as she knows herself, and how Ace and Sabo both react to the other's family and how realistic you make their jealousy. I love how you write the breakout and Luffy is a ball of sunshine like always, and overall I just love this fic so much! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Huh wonder when the marines will set out the kill order on Ace. Sabo would be first responder!

These reunion fics...are so good. I love Ace and Sabo being the Big Brothers. And Sabo bonding with the Whitebeard crew, and Koala showing up to poke fun at the two brothers...good content. I also like to think Ace pops in to the revolutionary base giving Sabo an excuse to take a nap. I'm very sad now though because Thatch will never have the chance to meet Luffy, the bottomless hole in which he stores food.
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that end made me cry im so damn week for this fic of yours. Your writing truly is so amazing to read. I ADORE THE DYNAMIC BETWEEN ACE AND SABO ITS EXTREMELY ADORABLE. JXJSKDKDKDDKS sabo tipping over finally because of aces narcolepsy shit im so emtoional that end OOOFFFFFF I LOVE THEM SO MUCH THANK YOu

Koala is really annoying I hate her, she is so ugly and her personality is just disgusting.

Hullo I LOVEE all your One Piece fanfics but wish by spirit especially and I promised a friend is ask but what is with the name? And if by yes? confusion anyhow I digress your fics are brilliant but especially wish by spirit! I was wondering if I could make fanart for it in the form of a comic?

So I forgot that Sabo didn't know about Ace's sleep thing or I forgot that Sabo maybe did know or notice but the stress made him confused and frustrated and forgetting things?
Also how come I didn't know this one updated?!
I only able to read this after a year later?!
Wtf
I Love it!

Not going to lie, this is an amazing piece of work. I love everyone's characterization. Its so funny, and true to One Piece. I love how Garp interacted him them, and how Sabo and Ace interacted with each other. Then too how Luffy joined the mix. So well done!