The way Harry yelled 'Get off me!' to Damien was priceless. Laughed a lot to that. It was an amazing chapter as always. I think Harry told Damy what he believed to be the truth if that little snippet of their talk is anything to go by. I also loved the way Damy scolded(?) Draco. Now, that was a good scene. Keep up the good work. You are great at writing those reactions and also writing a background scenario.

I was really happy to see this update. Thanks for posting it. I don't care how long it takes for the updates to come, as long as they are being written, with your health and safey in mind. It's really interesting, seeing everyone's reactions to the book they are reading.
Will you write anything on the side stories, like the Readers Choice snippets by Kurioine, or bits by other authors, like Unforgivably Thick Jumpers and Blades, Bloodsuckers and Babysitting by VoldemortCan'tStopTheRock?
I really enjoy the bits with Draco, showing how he cares about Harry and is angry on his behalf. When will he realize the truth of what happened? What about James and Lilly and the rest of the group? What will happen with Moody and Charlie? I am really looking forward to their reactions when Harrry and Ginny get together. I think it will be funny.

Ginny doesn't seem like a girl that would purposely ignored or be oblivious of someone's bad attitude or bad actions just because she may have a crush on them, just like in The Darkness Within she was always very honest if she didn't agree with someone's actions, especially with Harry, besides, I always thought that in this storyline she was old enough to leave that type of little girl crush behind. I just hope that you give her more depth other than her been automatically in love with Harry just because she already thinks that he is the one that saved her, she can't just ignore everything else blinded by the fantasy of her hero like a little girl, she's supposed to be living and experiencing times of war, she has to be more conscious and realistic than that.

Cool

why was fleur so excited about harry becoming bills brother in law? personally i like the whole dark prince thing, just not fond of harry/ginny

please update the next chapter

if they want to know then dumbledore cannot stop draco from telling them

how does dumbledore know the elf was draco's or that draco can read latin?

how do they know, in the actual book itself, not the reading part, but how did they know the prince wasn't seventeen yet?

only thing i disliked about this fic, is that it is/was harry/ginny

This was highly entertaining! It's really cool to read the character reactions to a story I loved so much. Good job, I really hope you update.

Update!

hey this was a lovely read, love how you nailed the characters personality and how they'd react to certain things. i enjoyed reading this and I hope to see more of it soon

please update, this is an amazing story, i hope you continue writing it.

When will the next chapter come? I wish you upload the new chapter soon. I'm excited!