So, I just randomly searched for as story, and actually I love Pothena stories, but then I thought: why not Hades and Persephone?
So I found yours and I must say:

I loved it! It perfectly describes their relationship and it's really a piece of art! Well done! Keep up the good work!

- Lady Athena of Olymp

Awww, that's a sweet poem! Hades story is really sad if you look at it and you captured his relationship to Persphone perfectly! *clicks the like button*