Great start, can't wait to see where u take it.

I can't wait for the next chapter! The ending left me fangirling so hard I almost squirted. "Looks like she saved me again." More like, looks like I want that dick again. This might be one of my favorite fanfictions, and it's only the first chapter! I'm very impressed with what you've done here! Please keep the ShikaTema train rolling and I will, in turn, prepare myself for the next chapter, which will surely be even more horn-inducing than this one. 'Horn' as in, 'horny,' as in I'm so wet just thinking about it. I hope you are as proud of this opening as I am, because it is worthy of great praise. I couldn't ask for more in a story; this is well written, in character, and established their relationship in such a beautiful way. I found myself tearing up at how cute they are, even if it was disguised by my coughs. #ShikaTema4ever
Please update soon! You are one of my favorite authors and I support all of your endeavors, but ShikaTema is one of my favorite couples in Naruto, and I want to see what you have in store for me next! Overall, this chapter gets a 69/10, because it made me wet and got the job done. Believe it!