Reviews for Of Rivals and Oniichans
SchneeKa chapter 21 . 16h
helllo. i just all the chapter in this story. i love it. please update more and thanks for the best story.
blackbox47 chapter 21 . 7/17
wanowanowanowanowanowano
lol and katakuri
blackbox47 chapter 2 . 7/16
tho i prefer a no romance thing with ace cuz i love sibling/family relationships, ehhhh its well written
Lady Syndra chapter 21 . 7/8
Looking forwarr!d to the next chapte
Chibi Zhel chapter 21 . 6/16
21 chapters in and I'm still hurting from Ace. I don't think I'll ever really recover, either in canon or fanon. (I seem to always expend a good amount of tissues when that scene gets reiterated wherever. Somebody save me)
Also, OHMYGOD I wonder if Sabo will register that Lu mistook him for Ace during that one scene and the way she looked and said his name (goddamit my heartbreaking OTP ugh-)? Those two (Ace and Sabo) really suffer from a serious case of sister complex HAHAHAHA it's so funny and so darn entertaining for all witnesses. LUFFY'S CHARISMA SRSLY!
#Luffyforpresident

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I hope the tail end of quarantine is treating you right! The New Normal is an adjustment for us all and not to mention all these additional issues in our country right now /huffs. Be safe always!
GreenTinge chapter 21 . 6/10
I can’t with Sabo. He’s too funny! Anything luffy did he would see it as cute. The ultimate sis-con that ace and sabo are XD.

I binge read this so hard you wouldn’t even imagine! Love it so, so much!
Molly chapter 21 . 6/6
This was such a great chapter. Amazing job!
Molly chapter 20 . 6/5
What a great chapter!
Guest chapter 21 . 6/5
Another chapter please
Guest chapter 21 . 5/26
I love this story can you make another chapter plz
Guest chapter 21 . 5/12
Please update the fanfictiom
Guest chapter 21 . 4/10
With tons of exam coming up soon and this virua run rampant all over the world, the stress from a little bit too excessive studying was eventually tiring me out. And this fanfiction did a wonderful job to lighten my mood :) thank you for the update and stay safe!
Demon-night24 chapter 21 . 4/9
xD lo amo ,amo el fic ,tome un dia entero y parte de la noche pero lo lei XD y me encanta,me muero x ver el resto del harem XD zolu es un amor pero lawlu tambien me enamora XD y me muero x ver saboxlu o kiddxlu :D ¿Como funciona eso? XD osea de sabo si puedo verlo... pero kidd? como mostraría kidd su atención jajaj XD no se ¿Con pleitos quizás? y law celoso es un amor ,ademas es verdad ella aun no esta lista para superar a ace T.T(¿quien si?,me partió el corazón su primer amor)boa también es un amor XD
scarleteyes13 chapter 21 . 4/4
Law on the moves! I love how the chapter turned out! Thank you for the hardwork!

I also pray for your safety Author-san!
acetwolf94 chapter 21 . 3/29
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
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