wow, i just found this story and can i just say that i was hooked. i didnt imagine it would be this good. i hope you would continue this as this story has a LOT of potential.

Ughh, i miss this story. Please update:(

PLEASE UPDATE PRETTY GIRL! I know it's discontinued but PLEASE continue it. LONG LIVE ITASAKU!

Awesome update can't wait to read more but I also had a question is there anyway to convince to continue with your ItaSaku story Pretty Girl? It was so good.

Poor Sakura. He just can’t be pleased easily. Hopefully someone will come looking for her (tbh it’s been a while since I read the other chapters and I can’t remeber if anyone would be looking for her). Madara May be able to lie to strangers, but what about her family and closest friends? I’m excited to see. I’m also excited to see Madara get kicked in the jaw at least once, whether or not the story ends happily. Thank you for continuing your story!

Very good.

u update TT finally we miss u

Just wanted to leave a review to say that I’m dying to know what happens and how she’s going to deal with it. You are very talented and your writing style is top notch

i was surprised to see this updated!
Wow, i had to go back and re read what had happened.
Thank you so much for this lovely update.

I’m super curious to find out what is going on with Ino, and why Madara was interested in having that happen. Was it just to benefit his case with Hidan? Have the psychiatrist on the case in his pocket for the trial by holding his daughter hostage. From what I understand Madara didn’t want to use his one favor from the Akatsuki, and was going to finesse Nagato into seeing why it would benefit the criminal organization.

Or did Madara somehow find out that Sakura was disclosing her work situation to Ino? And needed Ino out of the picture so that no one would have an inkling as to what happened to Sakura now that she too was abducted. I’m curious to see how Madara is going to cover his tracks.

I wish there would have been more Tobirama x Sakura moments in the office. I like the mention of how Sakura was immediately attracted to him. I was kind of blindsided when later in the story you mentioned Sakura going to the dance with Kiba. It makes sense since they are of the same age and probably got to the same school, but there was no prior mention of her interest in Kiba so it took me by surprise.

In fact the brief mention to the dance and the little time Sakura had to met up with Ino at the tea shop really does emphasize that Sakura has no time for friends and a basically nonexistent social life.

School was also not really mentioned after the class trials and her being offered the job at the firm. Did Madara pull some stings in her school and have her assignments extended or have her switch to online classes?

I know Sakura mentioned to Hashirama on the elevator that Madara was “helpful” but what does that mean?

Isn’t Madara worried that Sakura might get pregnant. There was no mention of condoms being used, and there was explicit mention of him ejaculating inside her.

I apologize for all my questions that are probably insignificant to the stories progress, but I just get so curious!

Thank you for sharing your writing! I can’t wait for the next update!

Lol hallway monitor America

Ino is a dumb bitch

didn't think it was going to take that turn but I really like it

I have never jumped on fanfiction so fast as I just did when I saw this was updated. I keep rereading all your stories!

Thank god you are still writing this... I'll be waiting for the next chapters