Mano, continua príncipe de prata pf

The last chapter is in portuguese. He said he wouldn't write in english because his english isn't very good.

And I don't know what the hell was up with the last disaster chapter in Spanish I think

The hell was with all the gender switching pronouns? Can't people write in a single tense and with correct pronoun association?

This chapter isn't in English!

I can’t read what this is. Is it Spanish?

I like where you're going with this, I've always like older wbwl on the outs with the family Harry. I hope you keep going with this story

:( Augusta Longbottom...

Before going any further; review this chapter, and correct any mistakes on any pronouns. Also don't switch between third peraon and first person in the same paragraph; makes it seem like the person (the reader) is not only reading the story but interacting in it as well, and as an other character that has yet to be named. Ao just stick telling the story in a third person perspective.

..Honestly. You need to know the spell, sadly. I couldn't even read this.. I'm not trying to be an ass but you need to restructure this.

not a bad start. keep up the good work

Interesting plot to include Neville as a child of prophecy as well.. everything's fine but please do something about your 'his' and 'her's ..

Nice first chapter

í like the idea. love Wrong boy who lived stories but...you made a lot of mistakes, almost every adjetive pronnoun was misplaced. like this for example: the boy was looking at him, HER eyes wide, full of fear.
and the correct form is: the boy was looking at him, HIS eyes wide, full of fear.

This is sad but is Harry a seer