The Story is well thought out and interesting from beginning to the end, it's to bad you stopped writing it.

Wow what an amazing story, surprised it doesn't have more attention

This was a little rough for the first half of the first chapter, but it very quickly settled into being a very good work. That said, I do feel you made one mistake right out the gate.

In my opinion, you would have been much better off to Japanize everything. There's nothing wrong with being inspired by Norse mythology. In fact, it's a very novel take on everything and I'd like to see where you go with it. But I feel that you should have used Japanese names rather than Germanic ones. An example would be to use something like 'Hi no Ou' instead of Fyrking.

Mixing the our Asian characters with the otherwise very Norse atmosphere makes for a lot of Melting-Pot Nomenclature moments.

A little disjointed but so far you've tickled me. Characters seem pretty much on par with how they are in the manga - good job for someone who doesn't read Naruto. And Weregild is interesting without making him into a Gary Stu. But is he meant to be Obito/Tobi? Argh, I don't know. Here's hoping to find out soon. Keep up the good work, mate. Cheers :)

Wonder what his crime was

Pretty good

Yep that's the attitude of the unchina consider in cannon clan wars it would not surprise me if they we raiders as well . I forgot how had kinslaying is in Viking culture does the clan know about how to unlock the highest level of sharingan

Odd concept of mercy with a father like that around but stranger things have happened says something there more afraid of him than the berserker nice way of ending the fight

Points towards accuracy him being illiterate wonder what happened in the invasion

Interesting

This reads like a Northlander comic. I luv it! Plus it's sooooooo refreshing getting a Naruto story with Vikings that's not about HTTYD or has ninja in it.

I love how in character you keep everyone and the way their interactions just seem to flow so smoothly and realistically - even in this AU setting.