YES! SUCK IT KYUBEY

That was pretty deep.
It was Good fic while it last.
You've got 5 stars.
So the english isn't my first languaje so that all I can say about you book.

too long winded

While I don't mind a bit of incubator bashing, you seem to not fully understand their point of view.

They fully understand that they are not doing good for the puella magi that they make, but view the extension of the universe for all other lifeforms to survive in as more important than the deaths of a few million humans.

BRAVO. BRAVO! The devil is dead!

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That was awesome.

Truth completely debunked and showed how there process does more harm then good.

At the end give The creature a punishment it dissives for all the griff it curated.

The only arguments kyubey could of made he did not do is, should all other lifeforms be given the opportunity to solve this problem? Especially ones that are more likely to solve it then humans?

No está mal. / Not bad.

Oh man how I love that little rat got taste of its own medicine also want to say you wrote this really well think I'm just going to read this whenever I'm down muahah

Nice philosophy lesson, ending could have been better though, honestly granting kyubey emotions would likely have been traumatic enough to stop from interfering at all. Additionally we already saw this happen to father, which made it far less interesting this time around. Overall truth comes off a bit of a callous and apathetic fellow what with being okay with humanity wiping itself out and potentially dooming the whole universe in the process. Your writing was otherwise quite good.

I like this. The Incubators coming up against a force that is beyond them and having their own wish twisted against them like they have done to so many others.

YES. YES. Make the bastard SQUIRM! :D

This was supremely satisfying.

So, this is complete alternative to the series of Madoka huh.

The way Thruth deal with Kyubey seems more like Homura XD