Reviews for Stay |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2019 This is HOW IT HAPPENED! So moving, I loved it. |
MikaHykaguya chapter 1 . 5/4/2018 this made me cry. wow. your writing is so beautiful and heartbreaking. thank you. |
Queen Hady chapter 1 . 10/16/2017 This was sad and Sweet |
piranha pk chapter 1 . 3/7/2017 This was a great fanfic! So many FEEEELLLLLSSSS *0* and the characters were perfectly in character and not OOC (since we already saw Vegetas ability to cry out of frustration) Great job! |
Oozaru-Huntress chapter 1 . 12/22/2016 This was truly beautiful Writing Vegeta in such a broken down state, showing such raw emotion is very very difficult to do But you did a truly great job with this Keep up the great work! I'd love reading a sequel 3 |
anlmoon chapter 1 . 8/2/2016 very good |
Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 7/2/2016 oh how beautiful and intense. I've seen Vegeta cry from Freeza saga so I can imagine what this scene must be like. |
Lyra Sprinkles chapter 1 . 6/30/2016 Beautifully written! |
TinyShinyy chapter 1 . 6/25/2016 This was so beautiful that I shed some tears! Such an amazing one shot. I loved it! ;D |
LadyVegeets chapter 1 . 6/8/2016 I really enjoyed this. I think the beginning was the weakest part for me, but I loved the rest of the fic, especially how you portrayed Vegeta's break down, it was written very maturely and shows a more human side to such a prideful character. Really awesomely done! Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing your story! |
Mikuv Ray chapter 1 . 6/3/2016 So I just read all your DBZ stories and I'm not used to leaving reviews but I feel like I should because all of your stories are so good and I love how you portrait Vegeta and Bulma, and how somehow all of your stories happen in the same universe or are different versions of the others. Never stop writing please I'm a fan now. |
Prl16 chapter 1 . 5/21/2016 She loves him so much and understands him. |
Spectral Guise chapter 1 . 5/19/2016 I really love it. Everything just feels so right. |
Lovely chapter 1 . 5/17/2016 Hello u .. how sweet.. how great.. lov it.. thank u |
The Night Whisperer chapter 1 . 5/18/2016 Well, I must say you've really nailed Vegeta's character in this one. We all know how prideful he can be at times, so to see him let his guard down like that and show Bulma how much Goku's death truly affected him was just perfect. It shows how far they've come in their relationship :) |