You saved everybody yay. That was a good story

Whoooo that's a big change XD Gotaya's gonna be so pissed hahaha
Well done!

MANO~!

I'M SO GLAD HE WAS SAVED

HE DIDNT DESERVE HIS ENDING -sobs-

Magnificent!~

*Screaming* I love TAL to pieces and I love this story idea! Some concrit, though: it'll make your story more engaging and less like a story plan if you flesh it out a bit. Yeah we know what's happening and stuff, but describing scenery, actions, and that sort of thing in greater depth is just as important as plot and dialogue.

The world needs more Tal fan fiction! :D I need more of this. _

Question though, why would people think "Yi-Mae" is dead when his yongma has shown himself? :
Or did "Yu-Jin" run away from Gotaya enough throughout the years that no one would really recognizes Gotaya as "Yi-Mae's yongma"?
(I can't read Korean either. xD Do you happen to have access to the text translations somewhere? Since the latest chapter update hasn't even given us "Yi-Mae's" real name and you seem to know more)

Great story idea! Keep it coming I'll be waiting for the updates!

Good luck~

Superb!~~

Interesting! Continue this awesome story! ...And make her love him! ;D

Please make her fall in love with Jin like in the Manhwa!

Magnificent~~
(as for Ah Ra I think her having a crush on him was a major part of her coming to his house and getting to know Jin but I'm still not sure if she should fall for him again.)

Awesome~~ can't wait to see how it turns out~