Reviews for When Did I Become Invisible : Visibility Series PT 1
Robin.D chapter 1 . 6/11
Liked it :-):-):-):-)
twi nana chapter 1 . 3/6
oh my, I do love everything you write
MiccaF chapter 1 . 6/10/2018
Excellent!
Twilight-Survivor chapter 1 . 5/22/2018
LOVE IT! I’ve read all your stuff and am now re-reading and I’ve gotta say your Jasper/Bella stuff are my favorites. (Granted I prefer Jasper/Bella... I don’t only mean as a romantic pairing. I love it as a close friendship or close big vampire brother. One of my favorites was “Why is it different for him/me”. It’s nice to see some more authors still writing Jasper/Bella stories. The Well has been running pretty dry lately.
1tinac chapter 1 . 12/19/2017
This was amazing. I wanted to stand up and clap. Only thing better ... She picked her own clothes.
Blistful2006 chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
Nice of her to stand up for herself just wish she could get the Alice monkey off her back too. Sorry her gift was helpful here but it is manipulative
kim87mcc chapter 1 . 11/25/2017
I liked this, can't wait to read your other stories
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 6/27/2017
That's a happy ending for Bella!

Yes. Edward controlling every facet of her life was, obviously, for his benefit and not hers. You'd think he'd have realized that Bella would outgrow the boy in him. Why would he leave her human?

Because as a vampire, she would kick his rear end!
orchidluv chapter 1 . 2/20/2017
Good for her!
jesslarhea chapter 1 . 11/4/2016
I find it crazy ironic the we are reading each othes series at the same time.

I love this by the way... Bella standing her ground and sticking it to Edward like that was funny.
andrewpine chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
Good to see that she has grown a pair,at someone in that dead relationship needed a pair.
AshleyStewart09 chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
Very good thanks for writing it
Bell 1 chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
Good for her to stand up to Edward in that way and take her life back. :D
Kemq chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
Good story.
Smile-J chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
I think the 'mentally not physically outgrown him' always was the more likely outcome.
:)-J
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