James Potter, dad of the decade, telling his year-old child stories from the cthulhu mythos

Please update

Aw man, a truly incredible story that is either abandoned or on hiatus just as it was getting exciting. Please tell me you aren’t done.

Thank you for a great story

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I like it so far. Update soon plz

Haha... Dump the Problem on good ol' Nick

RE to Ada1229: Huh. Never mind. My theory was so wrong that the story specifically states it’s NOT what I thought it was.

RE to Ada1229: This is just my take prior to reading the story, but calling it a pocket space makes sense. It’s not a pocket dimension, it’s a pocket space, an extended space much like Hermione’s little handbag. So the actual exit the train takes might look as small as a penny from the outside. If my theory is right that is.

erm...I don't think Harry's right saying the gate to Platform 9 and 3/4 is a portal to a pocket space. Consider that the train seems to take the students from London. No, personally I think it's more like a really advanced possiblly goblin made portkey. on contact it takes the user to a hidden train station somewhere on the edge of London. Possiblly this building has wards on it that are like Hogwarts, they make the building look abandoned ruins and a place to be avoided

Thunder-...or well technically Lightning bird of Native American lore fits that description mostly. I'm not sure about the destruction part, I'm not as big on Native American myth then I am on Greeko-Roman, Egyptian and Norse mythology. But it I know some about it, like it's a (duh) bird, so it flies and it produces thunderstorms as it flies...and I supose said thunderstorms could actually cause destruction if they're violent enough but that part is just my own personal belief

Updates?

I rather enjoyed that. Feels like Harry needs socialisin tho

Not going to lie, I stopped reading about seers about half way through and I'm just skipping to the next chapter. History and explanation can be great, but the flow felt a bit redundant and circling, which led to boredom. You clearly can write well, and you also clearly have something thought out, so I'm moving on to the real story with hope.

Excellent portrayal of a dyrad, and would love to incorporate the broader scale of your world's idea of them into my own work with your permission.