Reviews for One Week After |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure if you still check reviews for this or not, but this is so amazing. You are a fantastic writer, and I think you did a wonderful job fleshing out what Jim would have thought in between these scenes. I especially loved "Casino Night" - so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I'm really enjoying this story. Excellent writing! You capture the emotion very well. Please continue soon! :) |
![]() ![]() This is fantastic! I'm always a little skeptical about reading unfinished stories, but I really, really enjoyed this. I hope you follow it through! |
![]() ![]() Omg love this. Excellent tie in with the expired yogurt thing. Can't love this enough! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh frick. I'm already invested after one chapter. This sounds exactly like something that would go through the mind of Jim Halpert. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Butterfly, yeah. His daydreaming is so heartbreaking though because there is a long road ahead. But Jims not a complainer, he'll be fine :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh...that last line! But according to this story so does she ;) I love how you put the expired yogurt story in his first week there. I also love your explanation of those keds... It is now cannon to me. |