Heh, smol gay Ruby feeling the feels for tol gay Pyrrha. Also gotta love the inclusion of Jaune getting an injury, that catharsis... As per with this story, everything was adorable and cute and enjoyable. Includin Nora being... Nora. I'm still somewhat in awe about how you manage to write all these characters so well. Thank you for sharing this story with us though.

Holy hell this is all kinds of adorable. I really enjoy the way you write Neo and Yang's interactions, it feels so natural and effortless. Plus they're just so cute as a couple. I feel the pain of sunburn though, so this is just. Good stuff. Plus a fav ship so thank you for this.

I'VE FINALLY GOT TIME TO CATCH UP ON SOME OF YOUR WRITING! And I'm so far from disappointed, this is adorable! I think I'll always enjoy your fluff, especially when the characters are put forward so well, with a really accurate/likely feeling? I dunno how to word it properly, but this is just utterly adorable, thank you for sharing it.

One thing I love about RWBY is that there are so many characters and, if you go AU, so many different combinations to play with.

Nights like the ones you described, just relaxing with your friends and loved ones, are the best nights.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Casual volleyball games are a lot of fun, though I wouldn't last long on the beach. I would burn and/or get too tired from fighting the sand.

Well, at least Ruby made some progress with her feelings. :)

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story - especially since it contained a number of my favourite pairings. Looking forward to the Pyrrha/Ruby sequel :)

That was a lovely story! It really makes me want to visit the beach! I can't wait for the Ruby/Pyrrha sequel!

Hah. She sunburns like I used to. It sucks

Whoa, hold the phone. Are you telling me that Pyrruby isn't established here? And we're gonna get to see it happen in a fluffy beach vacation setting? YES PLEASE!

I can't even begin to emphasize how freaking adorable flustered Neo is. To be fair, if I saw Yang in a bikini, I probably would have a similar reaction. And I'm with you on the height difference. It makes this even more cute!

Can't wait for the Pyrruby fluff!

Thank you for this adorable Yang/Neo chapter, this pairing is fast becoming on of my favourites. Looking forward to seeing Ruby and Pyrrha's chapter :)

Poor Neo, I've felt her pain, literally. I burn like a bonfire in the sun, even with sunscreen lathered on. Without it? Agony for days, especially showering.

Thankfully for her, Yang is a very good, sweet, and understanding girlfriend, willing to gently put her foot down, make her feel better, and even give her a show. ;)

I also love their height difference, and the image of Neo curled up on top of Yang is super adorable.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Baked Alaska fluff! Yay! Cute neo is cute, and yes her being so small is defiantly a plus. For a second there I thought the massage was gunna have a "happy ending"

Holy crap. The cutness overload. love this

Aaaaand you gave me cavities. Again. This was so cute! I love when my Monochrome babies act like such sappy dorks. Someone needs to draw them with the kissing kitten plushies, because that image is too adorable for words. Can't wait for the next chapter!

So much fluff! Really enjoying this so far though Weiss seems not as snappish as she is in canon.