Shirou-dot-exe

has crashed

-It was at that point that Shirou decided to let his brain shut down and finally went unconscious at his current situation.-

has fatally crashed

Please continue.

Bad,just boring and stupid ,Marry Seo, looks like author was children 5-7 years better

Update

you might want to stick to one point of view ether third point of view or first because its rather hard to read at times

This would be better if you had the events of fate zero happen followed by whatever fate stay night path you choode where sakura rin shirou and ilya all survive making that the 5th war then have apocrypha be the 6th war taking place ten years after the 5th war which t9k place ten years after the 4th. Make it where darmic got enough of the main grail but not all of it that he was able to recreate\repair the grail war after the 70 years

Got that creative juice again?

I read this entire story and its prequel and I love it! Their were parts of this story that made me laugh(Shirou, Arthuria, and Jeanne's relationship skits just make me laugh!) and it was well balanced with the serious moments. I also liked all the winks and nods to the other stories in this chapter and some of EMIYA's adventures as some of those exploits he listed were hilarious! Now this story has the same problems that I listed in Magischer Kriegers. But like that story in this one their are far more positives than negatives that make it shine. I also liked how you began shipping Tamamo and EMIYA, along with Irisviel and Gabriel. Oh man this was a good story and I hope to see more chapters.

Jeanne Alter for Shirou's harem harem Y'all

Nice work mate. Keep up the good work.

Wow... Gabe is really angry that Shirou and Ruler didn't contact them about the enemy servant, I can't wait to see how they will react if Gabe learned about it.

I find Archer Emiya's POV is funny especially him once nearly have a threesome with his female counterpart who act like Taiga and female Gil before barely escape for his lifeXD

It looks like we got a Avenger or Dark Ruler, on the enemy side... I wonder how it will go?

When will Saber has her time? And... will Mordred later calls Shirou "mother" in front of everybody, especially when Archer is nearby?
I bet he will laugh his ass off after that.

This is a good chapter especially I like how Shirou's date with Ruler before interrupted by Giles who wants her back and Shirou conformed Ruler about what happened.

Another favor scene I like here is Sakura being pissed off at her sister and Luvia fighting that break the televison, scared the servants and her own momXD

Keep up the good work.