Reviews for Not a Dream |
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Nihil Asara chapter 23 . 6/26 Hmm.. seems like this story ended up weighed pretty heavily towards HPverse |
Roostertheking chapter 56 . 5/10 Alex is too stubborn just like John... But he too gave her second chance by not killer her... What she did.. She ran away to be a witch.. First chance she got... So may be she thinks all monsters will be like her and first chance they get they will do evil... So kill them... But wasn't she all upset and down when she killed the dark wizard?... She is pretending as if she was going on regular hunts before she came to Hogwarts... She is just stupid not powerful too... Each time she takes gun.. It gets pulled away from her and Neville saves her ass... Again and again... She is just bullhead... She islike cannon Ron... |
Dark-n-Twisty chapter 28 . 1/3 Why is this suddenly becoming the Neville Longbottom show? Weird direction this story is taking. I was eager to focus on Haven and how she relates both halves of her life, as a fledging hunter and a witch but...I don't know? There's a lot of focus on Neville and how much everyone likes him and sort of just tolerates Haven (with the exception of the Weasley twins)...just a weird direction for a story that we are supposed to be rooting for Haven in. |
Demonica-Death chapter 56 . 12/4/2019 More please! |
Fairy King Oberon chapter 17 . 11/22/2019 Two words. Two words whose powers of intimidation make even gods tremble in terror of unfathomable intensity. Those words are... PRANK WAR! |
NaiaLune chapter 56 . 8/19/2019 OH FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT’S HOLY! AAARGH! If Haven doesn’t pull her head out of her arse regarding Draco, I am going to FLIP! I get that she’s 12, but she’s also not an idiot! This absolute stupidity has gone on for FAR too long! (That said, love the fic and can’t wait for another chapter!) |
MewLover9000 chapter 56 . 8/16/2019 This was an absolutely fabulous piece of work. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for spinning the wonderful tale. I know Haven has her whole life ahead of her and dangers too, but will she ever Hunt again? I noticed you're planning to rewrite this? Has the Story gotten stale for you? And alternating POVs was clever on hour part, helped us understand the cast better. Loved the action and drama too. Good luck with your stories |
CureCaligraphy chapter 12 . 8/14/2019 oh dear. |
PasiveNox chapter 56 . 8/13/2019 hmmmmmm great |
Ninjettey chapter 56 . 8/13/2019 Thank you. I will most definitely be reading the rewrite. |
myafroatemydog chapter 17 . 8/6/2019 Good. Hapt |
myafroatemydog chapter 16 . 8/6/2019 I feel bad for Draco |
myafroatemydog chapter 15 . 8/6/2019 Pretty excellent chapter. |
myafroatemydog chapter 14 . 8/6/2019 Pretty fantastic chapter |
myafroatemydog chapter 13 . 8/6/2019 This was a good chapter hopefully she makes friends with hermoine |