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![]() ![]() ![]() I admit that after reading this I am going to wait for it's an update no matter how long. It's the time travel fic I've always dreamed of. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhhh I don’t like like how she has shown a lot of skin...ehehe but I like this story! I don’t rlly know how I feel about others knowing that’s she’s from the future but...illl see how this goes |
![]() ![]() This is awesome. I love the itachi and Sakura moment there. Pls update soon and keep up the great work me dude |
![]() ![]() ohh sweet i love the way u incorporated itachi into all of this so unique for a way to involve him compared to others with the whole time travel thing..! |
![]() ![]() I love this story it's amazing! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter thanks for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() this looks like such an awesome read! I hope there is more to come. You should find something to break your story apart. like when switching to Kakashi or to Sakura. like a Simple "" to show we are changing people or scenes. A few spelling errors. But its a lovely story so far. I see you use ivIve. I see ivthe thing in your arm. XD! I'm not trying to flame. I'm just trying to help. Even i have shity spelling and miss stuff! I can't wait to read more! Please Update when you get the chance! Safe holidays! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pls update soon this story is amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great chapter! And it's nice that he's on her side now. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great. Itachi is her ally now - apparently. I cant wait to see what happens when she meets her team again. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow what an intense beginning! can't wait to read ! more but what about the tracking thing kakashi did why is she still alone |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! It's so intense~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've got me hooked, I've reread this a few times since I stumbled upon it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First off I love how this story starts, other stories have the protagonist waking in the past and just going with it, making up some plan almost instantly and trying to change things. Your story starts great, she's just panicking, I love it. Your story is extremely well written and I find it hard to believe it's your first. That being said you do have some spelling issues, nothing that impedes understanding, but it's there. Like you use the incorrect words sometimes like once you used dear instead of dare. I suggest getting a beta, those spelling, grammar and word choice errors can be fixed up nice and easy. |
![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story! |