I like the effort on charles' part

Congrats for college! I think it's going to be real hard on you if you write fanfic and go to school!

How far is it from the King and where Bella's house is? She's going to have a lot of problems with James!

We always hate James! The only good James is in the greatest Fic "A May to December Romance". It's the best Fic written IMO but very, very, long between chapters and James and Victoria are Edwards best friends. You will love it!

Just like I am loving this story! Poor Bella, her father is gone... I hope the Prince kills James eventually! ;)

Still interested in this story...

Well the prince put her in her place and maybe gave her some hope.

Well I think you write really good and I'm enjoying the plot and waiting to hear Edward of course...

This is very good so far! I love period stories so please try to complete it. If you post again people will have faith that you will finish it. If you can't finish it for your own reasons put it "In Hiatus " so we know you would like to finish in the future.

Please update soon! I love this story!

Another good chapter. Really enjoying this story but can you please specify who's point of view... if I missed it please disregard lol

I think Aro and James are in an unholy alliance.

Aro has no reason for smugness, so he's up to no good. And I'm not sure I trust Demitri ... just because he's Demitri. Hopefully he'll prove me wrong and the ruse to catch James will at least produce evidence, if not the man himself.

Sending the actual aid from nearby towns and using a decoy to lure James in was a smart idea!
Thanks for the update.

Aro is always up to no good...

:)

Is Lord Demitri really trustworthy?
Thanks for the update!