Thanks for the hard work love the story _
Please don't drop _

Suggestion: Piano rendition of Fukai Mori (Deep Forest in English, they are now in Konoha, seems appropriate) by Do As Infinity and Karenai Hana by Mikuni Shimokawa. Karenai Hana is already sung with piano chords. It's also a tear-inducing song. The bar's patrons will be bawling their eyes out. And, yes, I've been binge reading this again. Ta~ta.

Hello,

I am enjoying the story so far. However, I am quite worried about the pacing. At the rate it is going, it will take another 40 chapters to graduate the academy (as the last 20 chapters were mainly ages 4 to 6 so it would take 80 chapters to get into the teens...), never mind getting to genin training. I dont see any way this story is making it to Naruto's time which is sad as I am really interested how the protagonist is gona influence Konoha and when Konoha fights Suna in the 2nd war.

What the fuc

Wait. How is she human. I was excited for an animal fic? Cuz EGG

The description of the egg was good. I got didn't know what was going on until it was practically spelled out for me. Looool. The main character rolled out of an egg screaming frantically (or joyously) is glorious. :D

Nice but also oh noes

Very interesting opening

HmmmmmmmMmmmmm

Well, the fight scene actually wasn't that bad, not to rushed and simplified, you could probably add a bit more detail, like 'I felt the flesh slighl3give under my attack, though it didn't seem to affect my opponent'
BTW, I love your story, very original and a new favourite!
Hope you update soon!

I wanted to add that in accordance to the timeline, the second shinobi war happened more than 10 years after the first and the sannin definitely fought in it, even by the end of it they had the fight with Hanzo that gave them their title. Also, hope to start seeing the MC start training the snake techniques Orochimaru was so known for. Anyway thank you for the chapter and keep the good work.

Great chapter!

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Thanks for updating! Hehe saved an Uzumaki

Good chapter; well written as usual. Was worried that Tamiki was Kushina at first, but I worried for naught. You got your timeline right.