No why why man

Thanks For The Long Chapter... Do You give fanservice? cause if you do add a new villain specially for Suzaku... And Get Euphie abducted... Some Chapters additional to the story line wouldn't be so bad.

LOL, 4th wall breakers in the end, that was unexpected

For some reason, I feel that Ironwood would be asking about the Albion when it comes time for his visit with Ozpin.

Nicely written..
I love CG and RWBY. You combined it all. (And i am happy lelouch not being here)
I am liking this story very much
Your story has a good plot and Its well written and has a huge space for future ARC s. Well at first i though Lancelot albium would be his sembelance the ability to summon a gigantic robot with MVS and a shield and float tech and Slash harkens would be cool. I wonder if the sword Suzake carries is an MVS. I am hoping to read some Suzake x Euphimia Flufff since her death tore me apart. And i wanna ask why just partnering with RWBY and why not JNPR too. And wouldnt it be cool of him to carry 2 MVS swards...

Well sorry if this was long. I kept screaming like Rubes. Anyways i loved your book and eagrly waiting for the next chapter

I like what I've read so far. There's one thing that bugs me though: you consistently misspelled Euphemia as Euphimia, I didn't notice any other problems and this one is easy enough to overlook.

I'm enjoying how Suzaku and Euphemia are still who they were before and changing things in their new bome.

Please update this cool fic!

Love it that ruby said "Can I drive!". Good job and Great work!

Interesting. I would like to ask though, will Suzaku actually be able to summon the Lancelot, since had the key, like he did in akito the exiled. If so, which version will it be. Since he's returned to his original age, I think it'd be fitting for it to be either the Albion or standard frame, but with their flight power limited, as that'd just be too op

I already did. GJ, update ASAP

Excellent! I'm hooked and looking forward to the next chapter - love these characters. Your imagery is beautifully done.

hmm. is the lancelot will be summoned via semblance? do they have aura? good work

A good chance for suzaku! good start, I wish you dont lose your drive in continuing this.

dang that cliffhanger TT

Interesting start I suppose. Although some word of grammatical advice.

No two characters should ever contribute dialogue, whether verbally, mentally, or otherwise, within the same paragraph. When the current speaker changes, you should start a new paragraph. It makes the story infinitely easier to follow.